Wow Kenzie, I was just visiting the 5SC blog to see how many people had written for the challenge this week when I found your writing. Someone from the next-door-class - it is a small world!
I love that your challenge is a poem. You have used some great adjectives: delicious, delightfully, yummy.
Challenge: Using a connective lets you add more information to the sentence like this: (from, with, with) Delicious honey tea sipped from delicate cups. Delightfully sunny weather laced with the scent of flowers. Yummy food munched down with crumbs scattered. Allana (Teacher from New Zealand) http://springstonteamendeavour.blogspot.co.nz/
Wow Kenzie, I was just visiting the 5SC blog to see how many people had written for the challenge this week when I found your writing. Someone from the next-door-class - it is a small world!
ReplyDeleteI love that your challenge is a poem. You have used some great adjectives: delicious, delightfully, yummy.
Challenge:
Using a connective lets you add more information to the sentence like this: (from, with, with)
Delicious honey tea sipped from delicate cups.
Delightfully sunny weather laced with the scent of flowers.
Yummy food munched down with crumbs scattered.
Allana (Teacher from New Zealand)
http://springstonteamendeavour.blogspot.co.nz/