5SC Prompt #18 Sonya
On sunday five little teddy bears were having a picnic watching the summer day go past. 'WOW Jim your eating a massive cookie fast'. 'Its a vanilla one Ginger'. 'Thats amazing tea Yogee'. 'Thank you James, it is made out of tea leaves'.
Hi Sonya
ReplyDeleteI really like how you set the scene for your 5 sentences. It's sounds like the teddies are having a great time chatting with one another. Try not to use too much speech, as the reader can loose track of who's speaking.
From Mrs Burnett (Team 5SC)
Auckland, NZ
www.uhpsroom172014.blogspot.com