Once upon a time there lived five small teddy bears. There were three girls and two boys. They decided to go have a picnic so they packed their bags and started walking. When they got there they unpacked their bags and had a nice picnic. Then when they were finished eating it was to dark to walk back so they called their parents and got a ride home and then they went to bed.
Well done Kiera! You have written a lovely story. i am glad they all got home safely. You have used time connectives correctly and have punctuated your writing correctly. maybe you could have added more adjectives to describe their picnic.
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