Chocolate Factory
I felt nervous and excited at the same time.I heard crunching of people eating lots and lots of chocolate. I saw mountains of cnances. I saw chocolate falling from the roof. I went with Mum Libby and me.The chocolate factory is in Dunedin. I went in the holidays. I wondered if I was going to get more chocolate.
Alex, I found this draft from last term. I really this piece of your writing. What did you see mountain of? Let's edit it together so it all looks right!
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